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When rummaging through a second-hand bookshop I found a book of poetry by Brian Patten. This one is called \"Prose Poem Towards A Definition Of Itself\": When in public poetry should take off its clothes and wave to the nearest person in sight; It should be seen in the company of thieves and lovers rather than that of journalists and publishers. On sighting mathematicians it should unhook the algebra from their minds and replace it with poetry; on sighting poets it should unhook poetry from the minds and replace it with algebra: it should touch those people who despise being touched, it should fall in love with children and woo them with fairytales; it should wait on the landing for two years for its mates to come home then go outside and find them all dead. When the electricity fails it should wear dark glasses and pretend to be blind. It should guide those who are safe into the middle of busy roads and leave them there. It should scatter woodworm into the bedrooms of all peglegged men, not being afraid to hurt the innocent; it should shout EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! From the roofs of stock exchanges. It should not pretend to be a clerk or a librarian. It is the eventual sameness of contradictions. It should never weep unless it is alone, and then only after it has covered the mirrors and sealed up the cracks. Poetry should seek out pale and lyrical couples and wander with them into stables, neglected bedrooms, engineless cars, unsafe forests, for A Final Good Time. It should enter burning factories too late to save anybody. It should pay no attention to its name. Poetry should be seen lying by the side of road accidents, hissing from unlit gas-rings. It should scrawl the nymphs secret on her teachers blackboard, offer her a worm saying: inside this is a tiny apple. At dawn it should leave the bedroom and catch the first bus home to its wife. At dusk it should chat up a girl nobody wants. It should be seen standing on the ledge of a skyscraper, on a bridge with a brick tied around its heart. Poetry is the monster hiding in a child’s dark room, it is the scar on a beautiful person’s face. It is the last blade of grass being picked from the city park.
i once knew someone with the same name as you that could write just as beautiful as you. maybe you are the same person, maybe not but i still enjoyed your work. tina camille121284@hotmail.com
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Hey, We\'ve never met but on my journey through the internet, and MSN, I came across your profile and your website. You truly have a gift for poetry and language itself. I hope you continue to use your gft to show others the range of human emotions. my email address is writesoonandsmile@hotmail.co.uk I\'m not as skilled with words as you but I do love the theatre, and the technical aspects of it. Take care Ryan Blackburn
hay i was looking thou the msn meet new people thing and i found your link. your intrsets sound a lot like mine. ur poems are very good. i have msn so if u wanna chat then please add me mimmyclifford@hotmail.com
Hi, uve got a cool ambition, i wana be a theatre director, good luck hope every thing works out 4 u Elflove x
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hiya i just fort ur website was quite ok!! love rachel rnb_507@hotmail.com
Hey Your poems are great, well done dude keep up the good work! Luv K XxxxxxxxX
hey thought id sign in kool site nd kool poems! lv ash xx
hi, u sound so like me, i love performin, i did performing arts gsce....but im only in 4th year!! im 15, i live in N.Ireland, belfast. and im a christain
your poems are quite dark do you draw your inspiration from personal experiences? i think they are amazing and really thought provoking
Very good poems you are a good poet
Hi! I´m Katharina and I am from German. I´m twelfe. I want to habe a lettter-friend. By Katharina
Thanks for the useful site. Keep up the good work. God bless you and keep you. -John-
wow ur poem'z r awsome. rach x
Hi nice poetry; I`m from Austria and i can`t talk/write english well but i have to learn that, that`s the reason why i`m writing you. do you have any e-mail adress? mine is marion.schiemer@gmx.at i hope we could be letterfriends have a nice day
wow ur poems r fantastic.
ur strange but sum gd peices here i fink this is a very gd web site plz up date!!!
hey Jj, these are all wkd, n u kno how much i love ur geckos, they so are cute! u kno im here for u, n keep writin, these are awesome *HuG* ur 1, 2,3,4 friend xxx ;)
Fantastic page, the lizards are an awsome touch! I love the theatre too, but I have to say that it's become such a fad that people don't take it serious enough anymore. I glad that there are people like me in the world, I could really realte to your poems. Ally Capri x
liking your poetry, i write stuff too but i dont tend to let people see mine, its nice to see other peoples thoughts. nicola xxx
Hey Jon, I write poetry too but mine is never as deep as yours! Im 17 and travel the UK with a Christian youth group and was told to go on your site to get a bit of inspiration- And boy did i! Well done you. Thay are fantastic! KatyG87@hotmail.com (If you want to chat sometime then add me to your MSN) Take care and God Bless you, Katy xx
yo jon dan here thought i shud write stuff in the guestbook like: "quit the poetry!!!"lol,kiddin neways,hopes uni is good have an good one dan
Read the whole site - very interesting!!!!!!!! Jo's Dad.
Hey Jon, Its Steven. It struck me that no one has called your poetry groovey yet so i thought i had better do it. It did take me a while to read one of them as there were two lizards sitting on it and i had to wait for them to move but it was worth the wait. I would also just like to call you a wazok (in the nicest possible way) before you get to big headed with all of these nice comments. Pukka!
love the poems, very inspiring.. i love and live for theatre too by the way :) love lissa xox
WHOA Jon, tis Alex here, Em sed da pomes were somethin, and they really are, dat's some well sensitive stuff, and it's well beautiful too, I'm glad I had time to stumble onto it. Dat is a talent, a gift from God (Big Cheese - (in joke see www.cru-cell.org.uk for an xplanation))Use it to his glory!!In christ A
Hi John Its Rich: really good poetry. Given me some food for thought!
hey jon i'm glad emma said about this place great stuff don't be embarrased!
the poetry in here is beautiful and it reminds of my faith in the human spirit and soul, Andy -X-
what does dfruj mean? jon, when are you going to write some more poems you layabout you *shakes fist*
I was lookin for a poem on sweet 16 on google and it led me here. Though there is no peoms about sweet 16, all the poems are great...Perhaps u can write a poem about sweet 16 soon..
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whats with the lizards on the page?! they are endearing, but get in the way! oh my, this is the second time this week i have been here. i want to say something witty, but i am not clever enough :(
Hiya, it's callie, just to let you know that you have been agreat inspiration to me and i am now starting my own site. I'll be in touch again soon. And thanx for putting my poem on your page it gave me gr8 confidence Thanx.. lv Cal xxx
hey, its lil and jo, just to say we think your poems (even though lil has only read one) are pretty impressive............... jo misses you very much. byeeeeeee
does html work in here? lets try <i><b>BOO!!</i></b>, hmmmmmmmm...... still loving the poetry jon and peter, i think you might just be the first guy! how about that?!
yo tis peter jon's brother i never knew this place existed so big!! so many girls too eh jon? hehe never knew this side of him am i the first guy to write on this page? i hear there's some poetry on the site too you all seem to like it:)
omg! jon dis is awesome i havent bee on 4 a while omg u rule say hi 2 hari 4 me-she aint 2 bad either catch ya l8r ciao ciao
heya hunnie! my names em and im only 14 hehehe! ur sites so kl! r u really a christian?! i am :)and gods workd wonders in my life recently! my dads a vicar 2! lol! anywayz i prob shudnt give u my email addy... but if u wana chek out my profile, type 'em-lou (emma taylor)' in2 da name thing!! anywayz g2g luv ya babe xxxxxxxxxxxx mwah x
hey my name is jodie i am 16 and i come from liverpool i am intrested in u alot as we have alot of things in commen if u r intrested in talking the please get in torch with me
hello my name is roseanne im 17 and i like ur site! i have bascially lived in a theatre al my life because ive been involved with so many shows and perfomances and its inspiring to see that others share the same love for the theatre as i do... keep the good work up and im sure you will go far xx
i like ur poems their really sentimental
hi i think your work is AWESOME. i would pay you to recieve some! if my love spent his time with that, i would be in a dream! well dun, keep up the gd wrk, email me if u want, luluxxxx lillelu32@hotmail.com! i also ave msn!!!!
Hey Jon it's Jo :D - i don't think i ever signed the guest book even though i've looked at your site on several occasions. Your poems are amazing you have a great talent !! Love Jo xxxx
we told u a long time ago that u were soppy havin read this i can confirm it!!! Better warn andy!!!
Hey! gr8 poems...howz things between u and ur love now? R u stillin love wiv her?
hey ur gr8 iv read ur profile we shud get in touch ur work is amazing and ur an inspiration. e-mail calliedodd18@msn.com Luv Callie
You have an obvious talent for poetry, its great stuff !!
Your poems are beautiful :)
you really talented, that's clear... you're hurting, im glad you can expres it in your poem, but if thats not enough try to talk to people, when the pain heals your perspective on life and poetry will be much more accessible
I loved your poems. There were really great. Be encoraged by all the great things people say about them. You have a wonderful gift. God Bless, Jo in Dublin
wow ur poems really mean stuff 2 u ... anything i write is all rehursed and stuff lucy.
all those poems and songs are amazing, I write songs and they're just like those! i found ur site from ur profile. I love being on stage and stuff like that cya xx Nicola
wow, ur peoms are so fantastic - really emotive - i'm not all that into poetry, but if i were, this is what i'd read. that link from the last comment is really cool ;)
jon, pls b happy!! i know its tough, but hang on in there, ok? just 2 add a little crib 4 myself - check out: http://pixiesrgroovay.deviantart.com/ :):)SMILE JON!
Good idea - deviant is a really cool site whatever ur talent is wednesday costa kicks ass!!
Hey Jon, just an idea, if you wanna reach a wider and more receptive audience, post your stuff on somewhere like www.deviantart.com. It's a really good site, with a whole mixture of creative stuff, it's really good. I got an account on there, and it's a creative outlet.
Hi, My name's Lucy. I think you sound Lovely! I'm 15 and I like lots of the same things as you and would like to chat. Your poems are lovely. xxxxx
hi my name it kitty n ur poem are really sweet!!!
heylo, my names hari long, i am from the midlands and love writing and reading poetry. ur poems are so emotive and heart-felt. i love the addition of andrew lloyd webber. i am looking forward to plenty of new poems soon ... xxxxxxx
hiya, im not reali into poetry but your writing really touched me. I can relate to it probaly alot of ppl can. its an inspiration to alot of ppl by the looks of it. i hope u do well in the future, sophie xxxx
I think your poetry is really sweet- ur like the only man in the world hoos sensitive ps gd luck with vicky
Wow... those poems are amazing! How do you write so well??? I hope the girl of your dreams comes around soon - who could resist those wonderful words?
hey, just had to say i love your poetry too- it really got to my heart and i feel so priviliged to be sharing some of the love you write about with you. you are very talented. a friend told me today of how she thought romance in the world was fast disappearing but now i hav found proof that she is wrong. Angel xxx
hi my name is keira, i was so inspired by your love of poetry, i cant believe people in this world respect such simple things as poetry, my e-mail address is imgonnashootmeat@msn.com id love to hear from you all thank you............
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Hi, cant write a comment without mentioning your poems which I must agree with all the other comments here are fabulous.So much feeling has been put into them. A very rare talent you have there!Keep it alive. Ok, look I have to say this so please dont take it the wrong way but, are you sure your a guy?! (sorry i know it sounds strange)But, well, most guys dont have any passion in them at all, well not the ones Ive met.Okay now im babbling. Great poems, luv Sarah(sez2004@hotmail.com)<- since you publicly gave out your hotmail when I enterd the site only thought it was fair you had mine.
hi i really enjoyed reading ur poems n iv used a couple aswell 'lol' thnx 4 sharing bi bi lv jess xxxxxxx
You really have the touch for writing the most beautiful poems, thank you for sharing them with the world... El.xxx
Hi Jon! It's us! Guess who! We're sat here, bored to death in school whilst you're on exam leave! It's not fair! We have to do schoolwork whilst you are sat at home doing absolutely nothing! By the way, your poetry is great! I wish I could write as well as you do!
whoo! wot a hert breaking poem! all most made me cry! keep it up u'll soon find a girl! love taz n saf!!!!!!!!!!!
hey um im jus random goin thru websites and i saw this and read the poems and they're amazing u realli shud get them published. they really touched me thanx 4 sharing them vicky x x x x
awwwwwwwwww poetry is so amazing! so saygoodbye but dont you ever cry coz a true love never dies
Hey Jon wow yr such an amazin writer dude! so romantic! god bless ya hon xxxx
i have just read your poems, they are amazing and they capture both feelings and emotions! im glad 2 see that u r using ur talent & sharing them with us. thanx, jemma x
your poetry is amazin hope ull have alot more for me to read keep it im very touched by what is wrote elle
That was a truely amazing read!I was touched by your poems and feel that you have a talent for it.Stay happy and keep writing. youpenga x x x
Poetry is a beautiful way of writing down your feelings and expressing yourself. Your true thoughts. These poems are truely inspiring, welcoming and beautiful expressions. These poems are breath-taking.:) Laura x
wow! you are such a hood poet! you could turn them in to a really nice soppy song! Ahhhh!!!!! if u ever want to tlk in cheekygirl7777@hotmail.com Ahh your so sweet!!! luv, hugz n kisses from sophie xxxxxxxxxx
Ahhhh! i never knew you were so romantic, Jon! So the computer creature has a sensitive side. Bah! (Humbug)
Your poetry is absolutely beautiful. i nearly cried, as i felt as if it related to me as well. kepp writing, harri x x x
ur poem was so touching, i felt wel crap and den i read them and i felt way betta. thanx, u made my day, alice x
hello i just wanted to say your poems would brake some of the coldest hearts, they are amazing, and so lovely to read. you have a talent love jen xxxxxx
They are a collection of some amazing pieces. Very intimate, much appriciated and valued. Thank you. Sarah.xxx
i loved your poems they are heart touching the words are so real u got it in one. love sam xx
The poems are really good. I liked the song lyrics too. Eve xx